LunchPolice's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[End of Summer; End of All]

Decent length, occasionally pretty funny. I think you mainly need to work on your comedic timing to get the most out of it. Also what was with the lack of an explosion sound effect at the end there? Lastly I would put more care into picking the colours, it's actually a pretty important part of making everything look nice.

artistunknown responds:

Oh shit, I forgot the sound effect. I might have just been too lazy to make another audio tract, cause I already had 3 going. I'll add that in now if I can manage to properly update the file. Thanks for the review, I'll work on my coloring and timing. Those seem to be my two biggest issues right now.

[How 2 Make a Ngs Username]

I liked it

The animation was simple, but it was pretty funny. Made me feel a little stupid though :D

[Super Mario mischief]

I guess it wasn't too bad.

It was a bit slow in places and could definitely use some music. Good start, though.

[Mario's Piranha Problem]

I thought it was alright.

Wasn't half-bad for an early sprite flash I guess. I did like the invisible coin block. However, I would up the framerate a bit and present it a bit better(the scribbly writing was pretty bad).